Thoughts...

[John Dos]

they tell me "think it over", i'm tired of overthinking
tryin to get to "sure/shore" my decision boat is sinking
so many nights with liquor in my cup n so much drinking
my tanks "on E" might be why I'm overheating
trying to escape depression so i'm lightin up
this weight's heavy and the ganja help me lighten up
they say lifes a bitch, i say life is fucked
and if you wanna go anywhere in it treat it like a slut
take what's yours, put ya foot down and go somewhere
don't plan to fight when you leave just go prepared
hustles important make sure you on ya job
watch who you hangin round or else you might get robbed
and a girl who loves you is always better than a snob
just some thoughts as i'm gettin faded
if you aint ridin now you won't be ridin when i'm famous

[John Dos]

they tell me "think it over", i'm tired of overthinking
tryin to get to "sure/shore" my decision boat is sinking
so many nights with liquor in my cup n so much drinking
my tanks "on E" might be why I'm overheating
trying to escape depression so i'm lightin up
this weight's heavy and the ganja help me lighten up
they say lifes a bitch, i say life is fucked
and if you wanna go anywhere in it treat it like a slut
take what's yours, put ya foot down and go somewhere
don't plan to fight when you leave just go prepared
hustles important make sure you on ya job
watch who you hangin round or else you might get robbed
and a girl who loves you is always better than a snob
just some thoughts as i'm gettin faded
if you aint ridin now you won't be ridin when i'm famous

[John Dos]

dude not every song has to be complex. its the start to an idea for a song i have.

and i could outflow you easily on wax. fall back son

[John Dos]

dude not every song has to be complex. its the start to an idea for a song i have.

and i could outflow you easily on wax. fall back son

[AfterThought]

Flow could be tweaked, but I guess that depends on the beat.

[AfterThought]

Flow could be tweaked, but I guess that depends on the beat.

[SoupErb]

I like it man. Gotta old school flow/feel.

Fuck all that complexity bullshit... These days people wanna hear some AMAZING space shit that half the time don't even make sense; They think just coz some Lyrics are hard to understand straight away - That then means the Lyrics are 'Complex'... Lol. Nah mean?

I prefer simple bars. Nice Dos!

[SoupErb]

I like it man. Gotta old school flow/feel.

Fuck all that complexity bullshit... These days people wanna hear some AMAZING space shit that half the time don't even make sense; They think just coz some Lyrics are hard to understand straight away - That then means the Lyrics are 'Complex'... Lol. Nah mean?

I prefer simple bars. Nice Dos!

[RhetoriK]

i fucks with it.
you should post it in Writers Block

[RhetoriK]

i fucks with it.
you should post it in Writers Block

[John Dos]

Originally Posted by Plaudit

So you ask for thoughts then you bitch when you get em?

Got it.

the title of the song i'm writing is "Thoughts"...

---------- Post added at 08:41 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:39 AM ----------

Originally Posted by SoupErb

I like it man. Gotta old school flow/feel.

Fuck all that complexity bullshit... These days people wanna hear some AMAZING space shit that half the time don't even make sense; They think just coz some Lyrics are hard to understand straight away - That then means the Lyrics are 'Complex'... Lol. Nah mean?

I prefer simple bars. Nice Dos!

thanks fam i appreciate it.

[John Dos]

Originally Posted by Plaudit

So you ask for thoughts then you bitch when you get em?

Got it.

the title of the song i'm writing is "Thoughts"...

---------- Post added at 08:41 AM ---------- Previous post was at 08:39 AM ----------

Originally Posted by SoupErb

I like it man. Gotta old school flow/feel.

Fuck all that complexity bullshit... These days people wanna hear some AMAZING space shit that half the time don't even make sense; They think just coz some Lyrics are hard to understand straight away - That then means the Lyrics are 'Complex'... Lol. Nah mean?

I prefer simple bars. Nice Dos!

thanks fam i appreciate it.

[Erupt da Monsta]

they say lifes a bitch, i say life is fucked
and if you wanna go anywhere in it treat it like a slut

haha i fucks with that , i could quote that .

[Erupt da Monsta]

they say lifes a bitch, i say life is fucked
and if you wanna go anywhere in it treat it like a slut

haha i fucks with that , i could quote that .

[John Dos]

Originally Posted by Erupt

they say lifes a bitch, i say life is fucked
and if you wanna go anywhere in it treat it like a slut

haha i fucks with that , i could quote that .

i try, i try...lol

[John Dos]

Originally Posted by Erupt

they say lifes a bitch, i say life is fucked
and if you wanna go anywhere in it treat it like a slut

haha i fucks with that , i could quote that .

i try, i try...lol

[Julius915]

trying to escape depression so i'm lightin up
this weight's heave and the ganja help me lighten up

Likin this line mane its cool, keep at it!

[Julius915]

trying to escape depression so i'm lightin up
this weight's heave and the ganja help me lighten up

Likin this line mane its cool, keep at it!

[John Dos]

Originally Posted by Plaudit

It's pretty plain basic stuff. You need to up your vocabulary and tighten up your wording flow and structure.

2/5

just read ya siggy...smfh you're a joke

[John Dos]

Originally Posted by Plaudit

It's pretty plain basic stuff. You need to up your vocabulary and tighten up your wording flow and structure.

2/5

just read ya siggy...smfh you're a joke