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The Edge Of Life
Everyday of my life I've been nervous and wrecked
All the blame and the strife, the hurting and neglect
Thought of changing the ways and living unified
Instead of broken to pieces, just nipping suicide
I just wanted the relief of all my hardship
to leave my remaining streets full and starlit.
Whole life, I've been living under the belt
The loser, defeated, unrespected and never felt
I realized the only thing I have to Change... Is Myself!!
The Change
I stood up and wiped the tears off my eyes
Cleaning this act up is what I realized.
Put Motivation and confidence in the pocket of my life
Walked out the door, head "lifted" like a Rocket in the sky
I knew I wanted to be something, Not the Man Weeping
I am wanted to be the winner, victorios. the Grand Champion
I wanted my belt full of gold and credentials
Let my potential unfold so I can be successful
At this point I knew It my life is gonna change
All the blame and the aim, won't be the same
I knew now! That dreams were right in the range.
Living on the Edge and Happiness.- PAY ATTENTION
I've made it my life an ambition is full of rejoice
Wealthy and Famous was the decisions of my choice.
Went from
Being On Edge, Scared and Wordless
Living my whole life aware that I'm worthless.
Realized I had to change it, Began the Sterness.
Standing Up Hard,
Taking off the Edge Of the Surface
Traveled long and hard, I finally accomplished my Purpose.
Put the Calamity and Affliction, That Garbage in The Furnace
So Victorious Now. I can't believe I've Living On ward
From
Being on the Edge To Living Life On it
Phrase Expo:
Being On Edge: Being Nervous, Jittery, Scared
Taking Off the Edge: To reduce the effect. The Change of reducing the hard times.
Living Life On The Edge: Risky, Fun... Etc.
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