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10-10-2011, 04:17 AM
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Path To Succeed
there is this guy who dreams apart from sleeping at night,
he sees the light at horizon peeping his sight,
so that he could visualize the world on his own,
accord, and set record to the new height,
he don't give a fuck weather the world is black or white,
he don't even give a fuck even if somebody calls him wack thats right,
when he's on the stage he blaze the track and iginite,
smash the fucking microphone and knack takes off his flight,
above the atmosphere, higher than mount everest,
he'll play his haters on the edge of his peak & mount his best,
1-2-3-4 he counts to test,
when flow breeze through the surface people get cardiac arrest,
their heart and brain are apprehended,
flow's so esoteric its hard to comprehend them,
coz the fellas living around the globe live pretended,
so their thoughts are in anonymity how should he extend them,
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there are some steps and a protocols to be followed,
don't let the monster to get into you,
don't let your dream to end in a vain w/no success,
adhere on your path to shine like apollo,
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he says theres always an example and lesson to learn,
the first chapter states that doubts should be lessen and burn,
the second chapter states that you should be concern to return,
the amount of jabs that you take in your life in your turn,
the third chapter states to build up sanguine thoughts to bear the palm,
stay patient, work rapidly & gear your arm,
have determination & do not fear to harm,
don't let yourself frustrate and drown yo dream into tear i warn,
so on
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10-10-2011, 04:17 AM
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Path To Succeed
there is this guy who dreams apart from sleeping at night,
he sees the light at horizon peeping his sight,
so that he could visualize the world on his own,
accord, and set record to the new height,
he don't give a fuck weather the world is black or white,
he don't even give a fuck even if somebody calls him wack thats right,
when he's on the stage he blaze the track and iginite,
smash the fucking microphone and knack takes off his flight,
above the atmosphere, higher than mount everest,
he'll play his haters on the edge of his peak & mount his best,
1-2-3-4 he counts to test,
when flow breeze through the surface people get cardiac arrest,
their heart and brain are apprehended,
flow's so esoteric its hard to comprehend them,
coz the fellas living around the globe live pretended,
so their thoughts are in anonymity how should he extend them,
--
there are some steps and a protocols to be followed,
don't let the monster to get into you,
don't let your dream to end in a vain w/no success,
adhere on your path to shine like apollo,
--
he says theres always an example and lesson to learn,
the first chapter states that doubts should be lessen and burn,
the second chapter states that you should be concern to return,
the amount of jabs that you take in your life in your turn,
the third chapter states to build up sanguine thoughts to bear the palm,
stay patient, work rapidly & gear your arm,
have determination & do not fear to harm,
don't let yourself frustrate and drown yo dream into tear i warn,
so on
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10-10-2011, 10:05 PM
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This was a ok read, few shaky spots here and there, one thing to watch out for is the repetative words- there was a good feel to it though and i liked the direction u were going- keep grindin homie-
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This was a ok read, few shaky spots here and there, one thing to watch out for is the repetative words- there was a good feel to it though and i liked the direction u were going- keep grindin homie-
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