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“ IIAm - i dont even know what Proper Grammer has to do with this battle. all i can think is you was trying to snipe one of his battles and somebody beat you to it so you changed a few words to go with this battle. Either way, The majority of it didn't make no sense.All you had were Multies which were extremely broken.
FV In Fellahs”
Just look at this pathetic break down.
His entire vote is based on an assumption,
He claims that because ii compared my Opponent, to another weak op, that it was recycled!
Just one glance at his votes and it’s plain to see he’s one of the cunts that needs 0 VP until he learns to not vote with his vagina
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Example:
Here’s a vote left by that imbecile trademarked
“ IIAm - i dont even know what Proper Grammer has to do with this battle. all i can think is you was trying to snipe one of his battles and somebody beat you to it so you changed a few words to go with this battle. Either way, The majority of it didn't make no sense.All you had were Multies which were extremely broken.
FV In Fellahs”
Just look at this pathetic break down.
His entire vote is based on an assumption,
He claims that because ii compared my Opponent, to another weak op, that it was recycled!
Just one glance at his votes and it’s plain to see he’s one of the cunts that needs 0 VP until he learns to not vote with his vagina
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Example:
Here’s a vote left by that imbecile trademarked
“ IIAm - i dont even know what Proper Grammer has to do with this battle. all i can think is you was trying to snipe one of his battles and somebody beat you to it so you changed a few words to go with this battle. Either way, The majority of it didn't make no sense.All you had were Multies which were extremely broken.
FV In Fellahs”
Just look at this pathetic break down.
His entire vote is based on an assumption,
He claims that because ii compared my Opponent, to another weak op, that it was recycled!
Just one glance at his votes and it’s plain to see he’s one of the cunts that needs 0 VP until he learns to not vote with his vagina
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That was 1 vote out of 7 on that battle
So 85% of votes were fine
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01-05-2020, 04:34 PM
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Originally Posted by IIAM
Example:
Here’s a vote left by that imbecile trademarked
“ IIAm - i dont even know what Proper Grammer has to do with this battle. all i can think is you was trying to snipe one of his battles and somebody beat you to it so you changed a few words to go with this battle. Either way, The majority of it didn't make no sense.All you had were Multies which were extremely broken.
FV In Fellahs”
Just look at this pathetic break down.
His entire vote is based on an assumption,
He claims that because ii compared my Opponent, to another weak op, that it was recycled!
Just one glance at his votes and it’s plain to see he’s one of the cunts that needs 0 VP until he learns to not vote with his vagina
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That was 1 vote out of 7 on that battle
So 85% of votes were fine
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Hell yeah exactly shot don’t make sense.
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Exactly it’s just a ton of uneducated voting.
Sentimental voting, revenge voting.
If ii don’t fk with someone ii stay the fk away
From voting on their battles simple as that
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It’s the main reason I don’t battle. Lol like tourneys and stuff, yeah but expedition matches... Not a chance in hell. Me personally I like to try new stuff and different formats while at the same time, your average voter couldn’t be bothered to even consider that.
So nah haha fuck that
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01-05-2020, 04:42 PM
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Hell yeah exactly shot don’t make sense.
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Exactly it’s just a ton of uneducated voting.
Sentimental voting, revenge voting.
If ii don’t fk with someone ii stay the fk away
From voting on their battles simple as that
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It’s the main reason I don’t battle. Lol like tourneys and stuff, yeah but expedition matches... Not a chance in hell. Me personally I like to try new stuff and different formats while at the same time, your average voter couldn’t be bothered to even consider that.
So nah haha fuck that
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01-05-2020, 09:09 PM
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Not sure where a lot of this comes from. Voting is super clean these days.
Obviously, some voters will put a lot more of an in-depth expo on a heater battle between 2 heavyweights than a random battle between 2 noobs. That only makes sense.
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Not sure where a lot of this comes from. Voting is super clean these days.
Obviously, some voters will put a lot more of an in-depth expo on a heater battle between 2 heavyweights than a random battle between 2 noobs. That only makes sense.
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01-05-2020, 09:28 PM
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That's ignorant. I voted based on honesty and truth.
#1 - That battle had a description which you completely ignored
#2 - Your verse made absolutely no sense, Your multies were so broken it confuses the verse.
You had no punchlines, and your a fuckin grown-ass cry baby bitch
Obviously nobody read that battle, Because you should have an auto L. You tried to snipe someone else but another battler beat you to it so you used that verse against a "Descriptive Battle".
WHAT IS THE WHOLE FUCKIN PURPOSE OF THESE DESCRIPTIONS IF THEY ARE NOT TAKEN INTO CONSIDERATION WHEN VOTING?
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haha @ Guts & me being hated for being honest voters. https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=515998
@ IIAM I don't buddy or hate vote. Even if I hate you. if I think you won i will vote for you or not vote at all.
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That's ignorant. I voted based on honesty and truth.
#1 - That battle had a description which you completely ignored
#2 - Your verse made absolutely no sense, Your multies were so broken it confuses the verse.
You had no punchlines, and your a fuckin grown-ass cry baby bitch
Obviously nobody read that battle, Because you should have an auto L. You tried to snipe someone else but another battler beat you to it so you used that verse against a "Descriptive Battle".
WHAT IS THE WHOLE FUCKIN PURPOSE OF THESE DESCRIPTIONS IF THEY ARE NOT TAKEN INTO CONSIDERATION WHEN VOTING?
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haha @ Guts & me being hated for being honest voters. https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=515998
@ IIAM I don't buddy or hate vote. Even if I hate you. if I think you won i will vote for you or not vote at all.
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Maybe you’re just dumb ass fuck and didn’t understand my drop. Like I’ve seen how you write, you’re the only one confused here. This is your last drop.
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dawg your battle skills about as good as the WIFES BAKENdrop another dumb ass vote -
and consider your LIFE TAKENfuck the script no MOVIE ROLES drag you to hell satan told me to CHOOSE THE SOULSyeah I'm being a dick ASS NOW put your wife on the -
that's a cheap CASH COWnormally I wouldn't SNIPE THIS but you remind me of the good days -how I would fuck your, WHITE BITCH with you tied in a chair and ask her how she LIKED IT. ™
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You’ve been here 12 years and still can’t fill a box
This is what ii dropped
Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR , Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER? Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER. Ya rhyme PATTERNs STRAIGHT RIGID, SLACKERS-get-SLAYED-in-this-KITCHEN-DAGGER-FILLETED-into-SMIDGENS-dusted-and-BATTERED-STRAY-CHICKENS! And every time you lob an open, ii’ll be there to SHATTER CLAY PIGEONS! Are you really this awful? Or were you hired to get your FACE SHOT with HAMMERS bigger than GALLAGHER STAGE PROPS! This Rap shit ain’t for you, ii’m not hating but even your names self deprecating!
Do you really have the education to have VP?
The obvious answer here fuck to the NO!
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Maybe you’re just dumb ass fuck and didn’t understand my drop. Like I’ve seen how you write, you’re the only one confused here. This is your last drop.
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dawg your battle skills about as good as the WIFES BAKENdrop another dumb ass vote -
and consider your LIFE TAKENfuck the script no MOVIE ROLES drag you to hell satan told me to CHOOSE THE SOULSyeah I'm being a dick ASS NOW put your wife on the -
that's a cheap CASH COWnormally I wouldn't SNIPE THIS but you remind me of the good days -how I would fuck your, WHITE BITCH with you tied in a chair and ask her how she LIKED IT. ™
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You’ve been here 12 years and still can’t fill a box
This is what ii dropped
Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR , Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER? Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER. Ya rhyme PATTERNs STRAIGHT RIGID, SLACKERS-get-SLAYED-in-this-KITCHEN-DAGGER-FILLETED-into-SMIDGENS-dusted-and-BATTERED-STRAY-CHICKENS! And every time you lob an open, ii’ll be there to SHATTER CLAY PIGEONS! Are you really this awful? Or were you hired to get your FACE SHOT with HAMMERS bigger than GALLAGHER STAGE PROPS! This Rap shit ain’t for you, ii’m not hating but even your names self deprecating!
Do you really have the education to have VP?
The obvious answer here fuck to the NO!
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01-05-2020, 10:06 PM
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Maybe you’re just dumb ass fuck and didn’t understand my drop. Like I’ve seen how you write, you’re the only one confused here. This is your last drop.
You’ve been here 12 years and still can’t fill a box
This is what ii dropped
Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR , Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER? Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER. Ya rhyme PATTERNs STRAIGHT RIGID, SLACKERS-get-SLAYED-in-this-KITCHEN-DAGGER-FILLETED-into-SMIDGENS-dusted-and-BATTERED-STRAY-CHICKENS! And every time you lob an open, ii’ll be there to SHATTER CLAY PIGEONS! Are you really this awful? Or were you hired to get your FACE SHOT with HAMMERS bigger than GALLAGHER STAGE PROPS! This Rap shit ain’t for you, ii’m not hating but even your names self deprecating!
Do you really have the education to have VP?
The obvious answer here fuck to the NO!
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You used another member's name in your broken ass multie. lol
Because it was meant for someone else.
Look dude take it to a vote.
See if that was a bullshit vote or not...
You like making threads, Make a poll thread and ask people if it was an uneducated vote.....
I'll Wait.
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Maybe you’re just dumb ass fuck and didn’t understand my drop. Like I’ve seen how you write, you’re the only one confused here. This is your last drop.
You’ve been here 12 years and still can’t fill a box
This is what ii dropped
Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR , Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER? Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER. Ya rhyme PATTERNs STRAIGHT RIGID, SLACKERS-get-SLAYED-in-this-KITCHEN-DAGGER-FILLETED-into-SMIDGENS-dusted-and-BATTERED-STRAY-CHICKENS! And every time you lob an open, ii’ll be there to SHATTER CLAY PIGEONS! Are you really this awful? Or were you hired to get your FACE SHOT with HAMMERS bigger than GALLAGHER STAGE PROPS! This Rap shit ain’t for you, ii’m not hating but even your names self deprecating!
Do you really have the education to have VP?
The obvious answer here fuck to the NO!
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You used another member's name in your broken ass multie. lol
Because it was meant for someone else.
Look dude take it to a vote.
See if that was a bullshit vote or not...
You like making threads, Make a poll thread and ask people if it was an uneducated vote.....
I'll Wait.
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You’re missing the point idiot. The point is for imbeciles like you to get a fucking clue. Speaking of points Your VP should be .12 That’s .01 for how much you’ve progressed
Every year here.
WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
GEEKER PROPER GRAMMAR,
BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER
Looks great to me maybe you don’t Understand anything above 2 syllables.
ii used your punching bag proper grammar,
To compare Cro’z likeness you imbecile!
Either way you’re clearly fucking stupid,
Don’t need a poll, cause the way you write proves it.
This is what broken multis look like.
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my punches knock you on your ass - now they BELIEVE YOU COMATOSED these "bars" get em fucked up - this addiction LEAVES DUDE OVERDOSED...// password on my profile - they dying to see what THIS COMPOSER WROTE put you on a boat full of faggit lovers - I'll sink that bitch, so you can - FISH FOR A CLOSER QUOTE...// now, real shit - this is MULTI MASTERS - (LBs) COLLEGE COURSE say ™ is inexperienced? - bitch, I FOUGHT THESE BASTARDS - and left them with a KNOWLEDGE SOURCE...// if you knew what I knew - YOUR HEAD BE SORE fuck Tyson punches - ima ruggers fan -this battle ain't over - so prepare FOR A DEADLY WAR...//
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You’re missing the point idiot. The point is for imbeciles like you to get a fucking clue. Speaking of points Your VP should be .12 That’s .01 for how much you’ve progressed
Every year here.
WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
GEEKER PROPER GRAMMAR,
BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER
Looks great to me maybe you don’t Understand anything above 2 syllables.
ii used your punching bag proper grammar,
To compare Cro’z likeness you imbecile!
Either way you’re clearly fucking stupid,
Don’t need a poll, cause the way you write proves it.
This is what broken multis look like.
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my punches knock you on your ass - now they BELIEVE YOU COMATOSED these "bars" get em fucked up - this addiction LEAVES DUDE OVERDOSED...// password on my profile - they dying to see what THIS COMPOSER WROTE put you on a boat full of faggit lovers - I'll sink that bitch, so you can - FISH FOR A CLOSER QUOTE...// now, real shit - this is MULTI MASTERS - (LBs) COLLEGE COURSE say ™ is inexperienced? - bitch, I FOUGHT THESE BASTARDS - and left them with a KNOWLEDGE SOURCE...// if you knew what I knew - YOUR HEAD BE SORE fuck Tyson punches - ima ruggers fan -this battle ain't over - so prepare FOR A DEADLY WAR...//
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Originally Posted by IIAM
Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR , Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER? Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER. Ya rhyme PATTERNs STRAIGHT RIGID, SLACKERS-get-SLAYED-in-this-KITCHEN-DAGGER-FILLETED-into-SMIDGENS-dusted-and-BATTERED-STRAY-CHICKENS! And every time you lob an open, ii’ll be there to SHATTER CLAY PIGEONS! Are you really this awful? Or were you hired to get your FACE SHOT with HAMMERS bigger than GALLAGHER STAGE PROPS! This Rap shit ain’t for you, ii’m not hating but even your names self deprecating!
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The wording you chose was poor and makes the read awkward. The irony of asking whom has the proper grammar when yours (here) is atrocious. “That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR”... these come across as rhyming/force rhyming for the sake of it. “Your box is filled w/ lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER”..? Seriously, man... that’s horrid.
Advice: focus on your punchline and write backwards from it, don’t force multis just for the sake of having them rhyme. You want your bars to flow, be coherent and sound natural.
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Originally Posted by IIAM
Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR , Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER? Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER. Ya rhyme PATTERNs STRAIGHT RIGID, SLACKERS-get-SLAYED-in-this-KITCHEN-DAGGER-FILLETED-into-SMIDGENS-dusted-and-BATTERED-STRAY-CHICKENS! And every time you lob an open, ii’ll be there to SHATTER CLAY PIGEONS! Are you really this awful? Or were you hired to get your FACE SHOT with HAMMERS bigger than GALLAGHER STAGE PROPS! This Rap shit ain’t for you, ii’m not hating but even your names self deprecating!
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The wording you chose was poor and makes the read awkward. The irony of asking whom has the proper grammar when yours (here) is atrocious. “That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR”... these come across as rhyming/force rhyming for the sake of it. “Your box is filled w/ lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER”..? Seriously, man... that’s horrid.
Advice: focus on your punchline and write backwards from it, don’t force multis just for the sake of having them rhyme. You want your bars to flow, be coherent and sound natural.
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The wording you chose was poor and makes the read awkward. The irony of asking whom has the proper grammar when yours (here) is atrocious. “That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR”... these come across as rhyming/force rhyming for the sake of it. “Your box is filled w/ lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER”..? Seriously, man... that’s horrid.
Advice: focus on your punchline and write backwards from it, don’t force multis just for the sake of having them rhyme. You want your bars to flow, be coherent and sound natural.
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That’s his name Proper Grammar.
Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR ,
Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER?
Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER.
that line alone shits on his entire verse.
ii know it’s hard for you to say cause your accent is atrocious,
But it isn’t forced at all, plus ii don’t expect you to ever side with me on anything.
I could say 2Few used to be a MOD and you’ll try to prove me wrong.
Plus that drop was enough to 100%-0 that kid.
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It’s like ii’m saying
Who’s more of a faggot?
Guts or 2Few?
Proper Grammar is one person,
Croz is another.
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Originally Posted by 2FUEL
The wording you chose was poor and makes the read awkward. The irony of asking whom has the proper grammar when yours (here) is atrocious. “That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR”... these come across as rhyming/force rhyming for the sake of it. “Your box is filled w/ lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER”..? Seriously, man... that’s horrid.
Advice: focus on your punchline and write backwards from it, don’t force multis just for the sake of having them rhyme. You want your bars to flow, be coherent and sound natural.
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That’s his name Proper Grammar.
Who’s got the WEAKER AWFUL BANTER,
That GEEKER PROPPER GRAMMAR ,
Or Croz’s BLEAKER GROVELED STAMMER?
Your box is filled with lies you MEAGER PAUPER SHAMMER.
that line alone shits on his entire verse.
ii know it’s hard for you to say cause your accent is atrocious,
But it isn’t forced at all, plus ii don’t expect you to ever side with me on anything.
I could say 2Few used to be a MOD and you’ll try to prove me wrong.
Plus that drop was enough to 100%-0 that kid.
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It’s like ii’m saying
Who’s more of a faggot?
Guts or 2Few?
Proper Grammar is one person,
Croz is another.
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