Let's be honest...

Originally Posted by Saxx

Most of the verse is GOAT tbh....

I would do a full breakdown but the Em haters won't care anyway...

His palms are sweaty knees weak arms are heavy

Palms/arms
sweaty/heavy
knees/weak

That almost every word rhyming in the first line and it all makes sense and is not forced....am I impressed....yes! Shoul you be? YES!

Remember we can look at how he did it lets not forget he's telling a story too.....

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Snap/back
to
reality/gravity
oh there goes

Do you understand the concept of rhyming?

Originally Posted by Saxx

Most of the verse is GOAT tbh....

I would do a full breakdown but the Em haters won't care anyway...

His palms are sweaty knees weak arms are heavy

Palms/arms
sweaty/heavy
knees/weak

That almost every word rhyming in the first line and it all makes sense and is not forced....am I impressed....yes! Shoul you be? YES!

Remember we can look at how he did it lets not forget he's telling a story too.....

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Snap/back
to
reality/gravity
oh there goes

Do you understand the concept of rhyming?

[Saxx]

Its the way its done @Punk

I think most if us would have struggled to make a verse like this especially in 2001 or 2002 whenever thos song came out..


Sure even I could make a bunch or words rhyme but to do it like this and to tell the story I wanted to would be very diffcult.

[Saxx]

Its the way its done @Punk

I think most if us would have struggled to make a verse like this especially in 2001 or 2002 whenever thos song came out..


Sure even I could make a bunch or words rhyme but to do it like this and to tell the story I wanted to would be very diffcult.

[Fredo Lombardi]

Originally Posted by Punk

Were those really the only things you looked for in the verse?

you did see overall in there with multis and lyrical ability didn't you?

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Originally Posted by Dean

You're only judging it from a lyrical/Multi standpoint?

lyrical ability, multi, and overall

imo Common's I Used to Love Her is the greatest hip hop song ever written
but hey thats just my opinion i'm not stating opinions as facts like you

[Fredo Lombardi]

Originally Posted by Punk

Were those really the only things you looked for in the verse?

you did see overall in there with multis and lyrical ability didn't you?

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Originally Posted by Dean

You're only judging it from a lyrical/Multi standpoint?

lyrical ability, multi, and overall

imo Common's I Used to Love Her is the greatest hip hop song ever written
but hey thats just my opinion i'm not stating opinions as facts like you

I would insult you but the way my dick is set up, you might leave the site.

I would insult you but the way my dick is set up, you might leave the site.

[Fredo Lombardi]

Originally Posted by Punk

I would insult you but the way my dick is set up, you might leave the site.

NOPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

[Fredo Lombardi]

Originally Posted by Punk

I would insult you but the way my dick is set up, you might leave the site.

NOPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

This is getting to be fucking bullshit. So I can rock an Archer sig for months and no one says a thing, but now every cunt's posting pictures and references?

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Originally Posted by Pockets-Poppin

The verse is powerful cuz its real... U seen the movie, u know his story thru life... Lots of people try but u can't counterfeit real... It always stands out.

1. The movie is in absolutely NO way a documentary.

2. Can't counterfeit real? You mean storytelling, acting etc.?


"Real" rappers are boring to me. It's always negative. I've got enough fucking shit going on, I don't need Eminem's problems too. Storytelling in a fictional format is MUCH better. Eminem has never had a more thought provoking verse then Dance with the Devil.

This is getting to be fucking bullshit. So I can rock an Archer sig for months and no one says a thing, but now every cunt's posting pictures and references?

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Originally Posted by Pockets-Poppin

The verse is powerful cuz its real... U seen the movie, u know his story thru life... Lots of people try but u can't counterfeit real... It always stands out.

1. The movie is in absolutely NO way a documentary.

2. Can't counterfeit real? You mean storytelling, acting etc.?


"Real" rappers are boring to me. It's always negative. I've got enough fucking shit going on, I don't need Eminem's problems too. Storytelling in a fictional format is MUCH better. Eminem has never had a more thought provoking verse then Dance with the Devil.

[Fredo Lombardi]

a few things @EtH

-you dont own the rights to archer
-I never saw your sig
-didnt your alt say archer was lame months back?

[Fredo Lombardi]

a few things @EtH

-you dont own the rights to archer
-I never saw your sig
-didnt your alt say archer was lame months back?

1. If I did, we wouldn't be waiting until 2015.
2. You should have.
3. No. Who's my alt?

1. If I did, we wouldn't be waiting until 2015.
2. You should have.
3. No. Who's my alt?

[Fredo Lombardi]

Dave was your alt

[Fredo Lombardi]

Dave was your alt

[Pockets Poppin]

@EtH obviously its jus a movie... and anyone making one would build them selves up, but the story line is real. E z jus an opinion...

[Pockets Poppin]

@EtH obviously its jus a movie... and anyone making one would build them selves up, but the story line is real. E z jus an opinion...