Let's be honest...

[Dono]

From a technical standpoint.

[Dono]

From a technical standpoint.

There's 3 of them... Pick a verse

There's 3 of them... Pick a verse

[Fredo Lombardi]

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him


Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope

[Fredo Lombardi]

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him


Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope

Originally Posted by Fredo Lombardi

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him


Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope

Were those really the only things you looked for in the verse?

Originally Posted by Fredo Lombardi

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him


Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope

Were those really the only things you looked for in the verse?

Originally Posted by Fredo Lombardi

Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope

You're only judging it from a lyrical/Multi standpoint?

Originally Posted by Fredo Lombardi

Multi wise: Maybe
Lyrical: Nope
Overall: Nope

You're only judging it from a lyrical/Multi standpoint?

unk:

---------- Post added at 03:36 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:35 PM ----------

S/O to @Punk for becoming a damned emoticon on LB.

unk:

---------- Post added at 03:36 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:35 PM ----------

S/O to @Punk for becoming a damned emoticon on LB.

.

.

[Pockets Poppin]

The verse is powerful cuz its real... U seen the movie, u know his story thru life... Lots of people try but u can't counterfeit real... It always stands out.

[Pockets Poppin]

The verse is powerful cuz its real... U seen the movie, u know his story thru life... Lots of people try but u can't counterfeit real... It always stands out.

[Saxx]

Originally Posted by Dean

Eminem's first verse in Lose yourself is the greatest rap verse ever written.

Most of the verse is GOAT tbh....

I would do a full breakdown but the Em haters won't care anyway...

His palms are sweaty knees weak arms are heavy

Palms/arms
sweaty/heavy
knees/weak

That almost every word rhyming in the first line and it all makes sense and is not forced....am I impressed....yes! Shoul you be? YES!

Remember we can look at how he did it lets not forget he's telling a story too.....

---------- Post added at 04:00 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:58 PM ----------

Snap/back
to
reality/gravity
oh there goes

[Saxx]

Originally Posted by Dean

Eminem's first verse in Lose yourself is the greatest rap verse ever written.

Most of the verse is GOAT tbh....

I would do a full breakdown but the Em haters won't care anyway...

His palms are sweaty knees weak arms are heavy

Palms/arms
sweaty/heavy
knees/weak

That almost every word rhyming in the first line and it all makes sense and is not forced....am I impressed....yes! Shoul you be? YES!

Remember we can look at how he did it lets not forget he's telling a story too.....

---------- Post added at 04:00 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:58 PM ----------

Snap/back
to
reality/gravity
oh there goes

I'd beat Eminem in a topical with ease.

I'd beat Eminem in a topical with ease.