THE REVIVAL - Ginge vs Nickleshanandan

[B U R D E N]

@Ginge @nickleshanandan, good luck to both.

TOPIC FOR THIS BATTLE -

32 lines due by the 6th of June, post your verse in this thread. Votes will be placed within this thread as well. It doesn't matter who gets it posted first just as long as both are done by the deadline. If for any reason you guys can't make the deadline just let me know, I'm more than willing to add on a few days. It's 32 lines but that does not mean you have to fill the entire box, choose the structure that will suit this type of writing the best.

Considering both are new to topicals, I'll point ya'll in the right direction. There's a few ways you can approach this topic. You could make it about someone getting lost down in the caves & finally making it out. You could make it where the person in the picture is apart of a search & rescue team but wasn't able to find the people who got lost etc etc. Use your imagination to build a short story, while utilizing your writing skills such as multi sets & metaphors.

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@Ginge @nickleshanandan, good luck to both.

TOPIC FOR THIS BATTLE -

32 lines due by the 6th of June, post your verse in this thread. Votes will be placed within this thread as well. It doesn't matter who gets it posted first just as long as both are done by the deadline. If for any reason you guys can't make the deadline just let me know, I'm more than willing to add on a few days. It's 32 lines but that does not mean you have to fill the entire box, choose the structure that will suit this type of writing the best.

Considering both are new to topicals, I'll point ya'll in the right direction. There's a few ways you can approach this topic. You could make it about someone getting lost down in the caves & finally making it out. You could make it where the person in the picture is apart of a search & rescue team but wasn't able to find the people who got lost etc etc. Use your imagination to build a short story, while utilizing your writing skills such as multi sets & metaphors.

[The Saaxxx Baba]

there came a time when life was hard to ENDURE/
and I caved in to the lies of it's sinister GRANDEURS/
as i ACHED TO BE ONLY SAVED/
and ESCAPE THROUGH THE UNHOLY CAVES/
as i was a stranger to the geology of these ROCKS/
coz the only ROCK i ever knew were CLASSIC PUNK AND HARD/
unaware of which direction to walk i TROT/
amongst stones which were in MASSIVE CHUNKS AND SHARDS/
in the dark about it's SHAPE OR PATTERN/
not sure if this was even a CAVE OR CAVERN/
adapting to the groove to move till the end of the LINE/
willed myself to march on BRAVE AND PRUDENT/
using philosophies as taverns to rest my MIND/
I began to think of these CAVES AS HUMANS/
they kinda represent our DIVERSITY/
the hollows and the cavities UNIVERSALLY/
all the SANITY & INSANITY/
either way they galleries of HUMANITY/
encapsulating all of our TRUE VANITIES/
all the mass slavery and the enchained FREEDOM/
tainted souls painted gold so you can't SEE THEM/
UN CARED WOMBS almost presumed AIRED TOMBS/
even though we born dead into doomed HEIRLOOMS/
just gotta look for the LIGHT/
in every darkness and follow it without REGRET AND FEARS/
always gotta put up a FIGHT/
and swim out of the hollows through an ocean of SELF SWEAT AND TEARS/
as i made my way out a man GROWING FREE/
took a look about to feel the BLOWING BREEZE/
almost UNKNOWINGLY i sensed a GLOWING FEEL/
the journey did me a FAVOR soaked me in it's AESTHETIC TRUTHS/
raw in NATURE and cloaked in POETIC VIRTUES/
hope was my ATTORNEY THROUGH THE WAY/
such was my JOURNEY THROUGH THE CAVE...


- Nicklesh Anandan
Raw in Nature, Poetic in Virtues...

---------- Post added at 06:34 AM ---------- Previous post was at 06:33 AM ----------

just wrote a rendition of my perception of the topic dunno if it fits but this came from deep within. Peace and all the best Ginge

[The Saaxxx Baba]

there came a time when life was hard to ENDURE/
and I caved in to the lies of it's sinister GRANDEURS/
as i ACHED TO BE ONLY SAVED/
and ESCAPE THROUGH THE UNHOLY CAVES/
as i was a stranger to the geology of these ROCKS/
coz the only ROCK i ever knew were CLASSIC PUNK AND HARD/
unaware of which direction to walk i TROT/
amongst stones which were in MASSIVE CHUNKS AND SHARDS/
in the dark about it's SHAPE OR PATTERN/
not sure if this was even a CAVE OR CAVERN/
adapting to the groove to move till the end of the LINE/
willed myself to march on BRAVE AND PRUDENT/
using philosophies as taverns to rest my MIND/
I began to think of these CAVES AS HUMANS/
they kinda represent our DIVERSITY/
the hollows and the cavities UNIVERSALLY/
all the SANITY & INSANITY/
either way they galleries of HUMANITY/
encapsulating all of our TRUE VANITIES/
all the mass slavery and the enchained FREEDOM/
tainted souls painted gold so you can't SEE THEM/
UN CARED WOMBS almost presumed AIRED TOMBS/
even though we born dead into doomed HEIRLOOMS/
just gotta look for the LIGHT/
in every darkness and follow it without REGRET AND FEARS/
always gotta put up a FIGHT/
and swim out of the hollows through an ocean of SELF SWEAT AND TEARS/
as i made my way out a man GROWING FREE/
took a look about to feel the BLOWING BREEZE/
almost UNKNOWINGLY i sensed a GLOWING FEEL/
the journey did me a FAVOR soaked me in it's AESTHETIC TRUTHS/
raw in NATURE and cloaked in POETIC VIRTUES/
hope was my ATTORNEY THROUGH THE WAY/
such was my JOURNEY THROUGH THE CAVE...


- Nicklesh Anandan
Raw in Nature, Poetic in Virtues...

---------- Post added at 06:34 AM ---------- Previous post was at 06:33 AM ----------

just wrote a rendition of my perception of the topic dunno if it fits but this came from deep within. Peace and all the best Ginge

[Ginge]

Originally Posted by nickleshanandan

there came a time when life was hard to ENDURE/
and I caved in to the lies of it's sinister GRANDEURS/
as i ACHED TO BE ONLY SAVED/
and ESCAPE THROUGH THE UNHOLY CAVES/
as i was a stranger to the geology of these ROCKS/
coz the only ROCK i ever knew were CLASSIC PUNK AND HARD/
unaware of which direction to walk i TROT/
amongst stones which were in MASSIVE CHUNKS AND SHARDS/
in the dark about it's SHAPE OR PATTERN/
not sure if this was even a CAVE OR CAVERN/
adapting to the groove to move till the end of the LINE/
willed myself to march on BRAVE AND PRUDENT/
using philosophies as taverns to rest my MIND/
I began to think of these CAVES AS HUMANS/
they kinda represent our DIVERSITY/
the hollows and the cavities UNIVERSALLY/
all the SANITY & INSANITY/
either way they galleries of HUMANITY/
encapsulating all of our TRUE VANITIES/
all the mass slavery and the enchained FREEDOM/
tainted souls painted gold so you can't SEE THEM/
UN CARED WOMBS almost presumed AIRED TOMBS/
even though we born dead into doomed HEIRLOOMS/
just gotta look for the LIGHT/
in every darkness and follow it without REGRET AND FEARS/
always gotta put up a FIGHT/
and swim out of the hollows through an ocean of SELF SWEAT AND TEARS/
as i made my way out a man GROWING FREE/
took a look about to feel the BLOWING BREEZE/
almost UNKNOWINGLY i sensed a GLOWING FEEL/
the journey did me a FAVOR soaked me in it's AESTHETIC TRUTHS/
raw in NATURE and cloaked in POETIC VIRTUES/
hope was my ATTORNEY THROUGH THE WAY/
such was my JOURNEY THROUGH THE CAVE...


- Nicklesh Anandan
Raw in Nature, Poetic in Virtues...

---------- Post added at 06:34 AM ---------- Previous post was at 06:33 AM ----------

just wrote a rendition of my perception of the topic dunno if it fits but this came from deep within. Peace and all the best Ginge

totally forgot about this, imma get 2 it
nice one lil nicky

[Ginge]

Originally Posted by nickleshanandan

there came a time when life was hard to ENDURE/
and I caved in to the lies of it's sinister GRANDEURS/
as i ACHED TO BE ONLY SAVED/
and ESCAPE THROUGH THE UNHOLY CAVES/
as i was a stranger to the geology of these ROCKS/
coz the only ROCK i ever knew were CLASSIC PUNK AND HARD/
unaware of which direction to walk i TROT/
amongst stones which were in MASSIVE CHUNKS AND SHARDS/
in the dark about it's SHAPE OR PATTERN/
not sure if this was even a CAVE OR CAVERN/
adapting to the groove to move till the end of the LINE/
willed myself to march on BRAVE AND PRUDENT/
using philosophies as taverns to rest my MIND/
I began to think of these CAVES AS HUMANS/
they kinda represent our DIVERSITY/
the hollows and the cavities UNIVERSALLY/
all the SANITY & INSANITY/
either way they galleries of HUMANITY/
encapsulating all of our TRUE VANITIES/
all the mass slavery and the enchained FREEDOM/
tainted souls painted gold so you can't SEE THEM/
UN CARED WOMBS almost presumed AIRED TOMBS/
even though we born dead into doomed HEIRLOOMS/
just gotta look for the LIGHT/
in every darkness and follow it without REGRET AND FEARS/
always gotta put up a FIGHT/
and swim out of the hollows through an ocean of SELF SWEAT AND TEARS/
as i made my way out a man GROWING FREE/
took a look about to feel the BLOWING BREEZE/
almost UNKNOWINGLY i sensed a GLOWING FEEL/
the journey did me a FAVOR soaked me in it's AESTHETIC TRUTHS/
raw in NATURE and cloaked in POETIC VIRTUES/
hope was my ATTORNEY THROUGH THE WAY/
such was my JOURNEY THROUGH THE CAVE...


- Nicklesh Anandan
Raw in Nature, Poetic in Virtues...

---------- Post added at 06:34 AM ---------- Previous post was at 06:33 AM ----------

just wrote a rendition of my perception of the topic dunno if it fits but this came from deep within. Peace and all the best Ginge

totally forgot about this, imma get 2 it
nice one lil nicky

[The Saaxxx Baba]

Sure thing mate

[The Saaxxx Baba]

Sure thing mate

[B U R D E N]

Good drop @The Wrathchild
@Ginge, deadline is closing in. Just want to remind you, I know it's easy to space it.

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Good drop @The Wrathchild
@Ginge, deadline is closing in. Just want to remind you, I know it's easy to space it.

[B U R D E N]

I know this is an old verse from Saax but is there anybody willing to step in and write something to this topic within the next week or so?

Try & get this opened for votes..

[B U R D E N]

I know this is an old verse from Saax but is there anybody willing to step in and write something to this topic within the next week or so?

Try & get this opened for votes..