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Actually if you reread the Prob vs Nicholas battle Nick had the better verse. All of Prob's verse was self-hype, not directed at Nick, or punch-less.
Including tons of self-hype in your verse and not directly attacking your opponent has always been a hard no-no. Not sure why Prob got a pass.
I admit that I'm Rusty, but your DELUSIONS OF SCORING WINS still AMUSING AT QUARTER STRENGTH/ I'll put this DUDE IN A COFFIN STIFF looking like he's SUITED FOR COURT AND SHIT/ Like I'm supposed to believe you're this RUTHLESS AUTHORITIVE figure, who speands his spare time GOOGLING ORONYMS!
Look how many lines he took up with these bars, and it's not even a punchline. its just statements and multis.
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I didnt read the battle, but completely agree on this aspect. ZERO of a battle should be self hype imo. That's A LOT.
Reefer is fucking abysmal. He's not even close.
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Actually if you reread the Prob vs Nicholas battle Nick had the better verse. All of Prob's verse was self-hype, not directed at Nick, or punch-less.
Including tons of self-hype in your verse and not directly attacking your opponent has always been a hard no-no. Not sure why Prob got a pass.
I admit that I'm Rusty, but your DELUSIONS OF SCORING WINS still AMUSING AT QUARTER STRENGTH/ I'll put this DUDE IN A COFFIN STIFF looking like he's SUITED FOR COURT AND SHIT/ Like I'm supposed to believe you're this RUTHLESS AUTHORITIVE figure, who speands his spare time GOOGLING ORONYMS!
Look how many lines he took up with these bars, and it's not even a punchline. its just statements and multis.
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I didnt read the battle, but completely agree on this aspect. ZERO of a battle should be self hype imo. That's A LOT.
Reefer is fucking abysmal. He's not even close.
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12-31-2017, 02:40 AM
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I hadn't battled in 2 years and beat MC-KG on RULE's card easily who is apparently a middleweight now. Even if you are rusty when you come back you shouldn't be losing to people way beneath your skill level. It's like riding a bike. When you come back from your break.. you still know how to do multis, structure a verse, come up with punchlines, etc.
RULE also didn't battle for years and came back and won a GC vs lockhart in the finals.
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There's a difference between how long RULE didn't battle and some cats.
I don't think it's just a time thing with losing your touch, when it's gone it's gone. I've struggled to write anything as far back as 2012. The last non-trash battle I had was long, long time ago. A decent number of battles I've had since 2010 are either throwaway bars from before then, or just garbage I dumped out since I agreed to battle people and couldn't think of anything not trash.
Try writing under 5 battles a year for about nine years and see how your bike theory works out.
I'm not really sure that the bike thing works either. I haven't rode a bike since I was probably like 13 and I'm not sure i could do it now.
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Yea, I guess. Those are just terrible battles in general.
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Seems like me an' you bout had enough,
Cause man, it's tough to keep the fam in touch,
And to add it up, this rappin stuff got me flippin out like a blackjack bust
Don't give a fuck if you sound like Master P, Mobb Deep or Remy Martin,
Cuz even if the next to try us is the best of rhymers?
Still get bodied on plates like Jeffery Dahmer
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I hadn't battled in 2 years and beat MC-KG on RULE's card easily who is apparently a middleweight now. Even if you are rusty when you come back you shouldn't be losing to people way beneath your skill level. It's like riding a bike. When you come back from your break.. you still know how to do multis, structure a verse, come up with punchlines, etc.
RULE also didn't battle for years and came back and won a GC vs lockhart in the finals.
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There's a difference between how long RULE didn't battle and some cats.
I don't think it's just a time thing with losing your touch, when it's gone it's gone. I've struggled to write anything as far back as 2012. The last non-trash battle I had was long, long time ago. A decent number of battles I've had since 2010 are either throwaway bars from before then, or just garbage I dumped out since I agreed to battle people and couldn't think of anything not trash.
Try writing under 5 battles a year for about nine years and see how your bike theory works out.
I'm not really sure that the bike thing works either. I haven't rode a bike since I was probably like 13 and I'm not sure i could do it now.
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Yea, I guess. Those are just terrible battles in general.
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Yes Yes Ya'll, an it don't stop....
Seems like me an' you bout had enough,
Cause man, it's tough to keep the fam in touch,
And to add it up, this rappin stuff got me flippin out like a blackjack bust
Don't give a fuck if you sound like Master P, Mobb Deep or Remy Martin,
Cuz even if the next to try us is the best of rhymers?
Still get bodied on plates like Jeffery Dahmer
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WHERE THE FUCK HAS NIRO STORY GONE BATNESS AYO SUBREAL THO REAL TALK AT MY WORK PLACE THERE AEE BATS IN THE TREES OMG BATS THE DUCK IN BAFNESS OVERLOAD !!!
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WHERE THE FUCK HAS NIRO STORY GONE BATNESS AYO SUBREAL THO REAL TALK AT MY WORK PLACE THERE AEE BATS IN THE TREES OMG BATS THE DUCK IN BAFNESS OVERLOAD !!!
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Actually if you reread the Prob vs Nicholas battle Nick had the better verse. All of Prob's verse was self-hype, not directed at Nick, or punch-less.
Including tons of self-hype in your verse and not directly attacking your opponent has always been a hard no-no. Not sure why Prob got a pass.
I admit that I'm Rusty, but your DELUSIONS OF SCORING WINS still AMUSING AT QUARTER STRENGTH/ I'll put this DUDE IN A COFFIN STIFF looking like he's SUITED FOR COURT AND SHIT/ Like I'm supposed to believe you're this RUTHLESS AUTHORITIVE figure, who speands his spare time GOOGLING ORONYMS!
Look how many lines he took up with these bars, and it's not even a punchline. its just statements and multis.
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I agree with u here 100%. Especially coming from shortbar sites, I find the amount of filler here incredible at times
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Actually if you reread the Prob vs Nicholas battle Nick had the better verse. All of Prob's verse was self-hype, not directed at Nick, or punch-less.
Including tons of self-hype in your verse and not directly attacking your opponent has always been a hard no-no. Not sure why Prob got a pass.
I admit that I'm Rusty, but your DELUSIONS OF SCORING WINS still AMUSING AT QUARTER STRENGTH/ I'll put this DUDE IN A COFFIN STIFF looking like he's SUITED FOR COURT AND SHIT/ Like I'm supposed to believe you're this RUTHLESS AUTHORITIVE figure, who speands his spare time GOOGLING ORONYMS!
Look how many lines he took up with these bars, and it's not even a punchline. its just statements and multis.
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I agree with u here 100%. Especially coming from shortbar sites, I find the amount of filler here incredible at times
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