Getting Scienctific

[The Law]

I'm the scientist that's on the scene talking and making rhymes
A genius with lightening scriptures somewhere between Hawking and Frankenstein
I'm two dimensional the type that'll inject shots and make rap endure my sick drops
because my 'Pen is ill in writing'.. I'm the new Alexander Fleming in hip hop (penicillin)
Mathematically coming at every angle and squaring up my fine lines
My Lyrics are a problem parallel to the equations of Einstein
I kicked it up on the net into 'LA's galaxy' and clearly the goat shook
Quickly 'out lining each star' like Galileo's Notebook
For bringing life to this site, I honestly deserve a genuine thanking
and That's keeping in 100' cause i'm more electric than Benjamin Franklin
Even on the mic when write and spit your bound to see glory
If I went mainstream, I'd have more 'radio activity' than Marie Curie
I'm bringing this 'power points to teach you a lesson'.. You better call the guests
Causee I'm proving newton wrong.. defying the laws of gravity and appalling vets
Since I been on the rise from day one and still having falling yet

---------- Post added at 08:44 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:44 PM ----------

The LA's Galaxy.. Line is cause this was an piece I dropped on LA.. Just looking for more feedback..

[The Law]

I'm the scientist that's on the scene talking and making rhymes
A genius with lightening scriptures somewhere between Hawking and Frankenstein
I'm two dimensional the type that'll inject shots and make rap endure my sick drops
because my 'Pen is ill in writing'.. I'm the new Alexander Fleming in hip hop (penicillin)
Mathematically coming at every angle and squaring up my fine lines
My Lyrics are a problem parallel to the equations of Einstein
I kicked it up on the net into 'LA's galaxy' and clearly the goat shook
Quickly 'out lining each star' like Galileo's Notebook
For bringing life to this site, I honestly deserve a genuine thanking
and That's keeping in 100' cause i'm more electric than Benjamin Franklin
Even on the mic when write and spit your bound to see glory
If I went mainstream, I'd have more 'radio activity' than Marie Curie
I'm bringing this 'power points to teach you a lesson'.. You better call the guests
Causee I'm proving newton wrong.. defying the laws of gravity and appalling vets
Since I been on the rise from day one and still having falling yet

---------- Post added at 08:44 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:44 PM ----------

The LA's Galaxy.. Line is cause this was an piece I dropped on LA.. Just looking for more feedback..

[Lizman]

It's Cool.
Doesn't Look Like A Topical To Me Though. 5/10

[Lizman]

It's Cool.
Doesn't Look Like A Topical To Me Though. 5/10