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Compare & Contrast
drop one of your old verses and compare it to one of you newest ones.
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=380993
Compared to
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=383742
I mean i had the basic idea... i just dragged out lines and stopped the punches effectiveness.. Also had too complex punches... I use to be an over-over-punchline acheiver haha...
Rule Stole my swagg... haha jk
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Compare & Contrast
drop one of your old verses and compare it to one of you newest ones.
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=380993
Compared to
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=383742
I mean i had the basic idea... i just dragged out lines and stopped the punches effectiveness.. Also had too complex punches... I use to be an over-over-punchline acheiver haha...
Rule Stole my swagg... haha jk
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OLD VERSE:
Yo Listen, Po tha superb *SCHOLATIC-ANSWER* ur words a “tad-bit-random”…u couldnt “WIN” this battle with “SUN TZU”, “Demetrius of Bactria” in *GERMAN-PANZERS* in *SERVICE-with-ALEXANDER*(the Great) and *INSURGENTS-CONVERGIN-on-my-BANNER*!!// im David Adamovich *PERFECT-with-the-DAGGER*…”Food for thought”, CERTAINLY *SERVING-up-some-MATTER* (flesh/content)!!// Ur HOE? *BURN-that-BITCH-and-JAB-HER* u dont *DESERVE-that-trick-ILL-DRAG-her* through JASPER…”Black ARMS in the AIR”(guns)…HUEY (cartoon)? No, “DUCK”…PO will *TURN-PANTHER* (Black Panthers)!! (wtf?) I *LEARN-FASTER*…Make a “Good Wish”...the *LINES* “THICK” like *POLISH-BREAD”, who gives a fuck about the “WIND” (win) ill go *OVER-his-HEAD*……..*QUANTUM-MECHANICAL* INVOLED-effects on larger *SCALE-OBJECTS* tha *FRICTIONLESS-speed-FLOW* and liquids at TEMPERATURES-impede-SLOW near absolute, *INFINITE-ZERO*// “BLACK BODY RADIATION” reflected and transmitted, and *ORBITAL-HYBRIDIZATION* the “Schrodinger equation” *TRANSLATED*, “EJECTED-in-my-HAND, SCRIPTIN”…formulatin the ultimate *MATRIX* formations…DERIVATIONS *ETCHED-in-my-PLAN-to-SPIT- IT* eigenvalues concepts *AMID-tha-MAN* I invent the “SCAN-to-ENCRYPT-IT!! (huh?)// Ur not at all *ILL*, looks much like a WILD *SEIZURE-to-WE* u *SPEAK-and-u-BREATH*…its not any medicinal STYLE *TREATMENT-for-ME* at its *LEAST-I-can-SEE*…Influenza, Bubonic Plague, Cholera, Ebola and AIDS is nothing but a MILD *FEVER-to-ME*!!
a lot of decoration and soft punches...I had a tendency to ramble/cypher like expressions instead of battlin.
NEWEST:
Yo listen, the MESSAGE-is-GRAND for a more BLESSID-DEMAND…erectin WEAPONS-in-HAND the index FLEXED-to-COMMAND, “PRESSIN-the-PRESSURE through SECTIONS-of-LEVERS” to CONNECT-with-the-PAN then cause every skin cell in your body to STRETCH-and-EXPAND NEXT-to-the-GLANDS, dehydratin you instantly (BOOM)…turn your FLESH-into-SAND without even CORRECTIN-my-GLANCE! You think you have “HARDY BARS” and your VERSES-ELITE…a “DRUNKEN FLOW/floor”, with more decoration than MARDI-GRAS on BOURBON-STREET…IM sick I could HARDLY-COUGH and MURDER-the-BEAT(police patrol)…your whole “STYLE is VEGAN” as described: the FURTHEST-from-BEEF also your SERVICE-is-WEAK, Ill “DIVE” through your BODY and PROBABLY EMERGE-with-ur-SPEECH, the “X-FACTORS” is a different VERSION-of-“BEAST”…the other day you ask me could you “KICK SOMETHING”…I shove my hand into his back like VENTRILOQUIST and began WORKIN-his-FEET until his lungs BURST-on-my-CHEEK! ur a WEAK-RHYMER…when BEEF-STEERED in a BRIEF-BLURR ill stick you FEET-FIRST through a MEAT-GRINDER…before the blades smooth ur THIGHS-DAWG, ill remove ur EYES-BALLS and drop them in a DEEP-FRYER…ur FLOW wouldn’t BE-FIRE, if you were an electrician with HEAT-WIRES a million DEGREES-HIGHER than a CHEAP-LIGHTER! Po’s a “Magician”…ILLUSIONS-DISPERSED tha conclusive CONCLUSION-is-ELUSIVE, but PROVEN-to-WORK…MOVEMENT-is-WORSE simply by FUSIN-a-VERSE, the “GRAVITY” of the flow will KILL every HUMAN-on-EARTH!! I inadvertently DISEASE and INFECT-SOULS, CONCERNIN-ME I certainly but perfectly breech and ERECT-SCROLLS…a “RHINO” (bullet) “MARC’s” the SPOT and LEAVES-a-STRETCHED-HOLE so BIG in his head, if he “LIVES” he’ll PERMANENTLY SPEAK-with-an-ECHO
less decoration and more direct punches...structure improvements. Although I still see a few flaws within this.
I think the elevation is pretty obvious...well there you have it
Peace
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OLD VERSE:
Yo Listen, Po tha superb *SCHOLATIC-ANSWER* ur words a “tad-bit-random”…u couldnt “WIN” this battle with “SUN TZU”, “Demetrius of Bactria” in *GERMAN-PANZERS* in *SERVICE-with-ALEXANDER*(the Great) and *INSURGENTS-CONVERGIN-on-my-BANNER*!!// im David Adamovich *PERFECT-with-the-DAGGER*…”Food for thought”, CERTAINLY *SERVING-up-some-MATTER* (flesh/content)!!// Ur HOE? *BURN-that-BITCH-and-JAB-HER* u dont *DESERVE-that-trick-ILL-DRAG-her* through JASPER…”Black ARMS in the AIR”(guns)…HUEY (cartoon)? No, “DUCK”…PO will *TURN-PANTHER* (Black Panthers)!! (wtf?) I *LEARN-FASTER*…Make a “Good Wish”...the *LINES* “THICK” like *POLISH-BREAD”, who gives a fuck about the “WIND” (win) ill go *OVER-his-HEAD*……..*QUANTUM-MECHANICAL* INVOLED-effects on larger *SCALE-OBJECTS* tha *FRICTIONLESS-speed-FLOW* and liquids at TEMPERATURES-impede-SLOW near absolute, *INFINITE-ZERO*// “BLACK BODY RADIATION” reflected and transmitted, and *ORBITAL-HYBRIDIZATION* the “Schrodinger equation” *TRANSLATED*, “EJECTED-in-my-HAND, SCRIPTIN”…formulatin the ultimate *MATRIX* formations…DERIVATIONS *ETCHED-in-my-PLAN-to-SPIT- IT* eigenvalues concepts *AMID-tha-MAN* I invent the “SCAN-to-ENCRYPT-IT!! (huh?)// Ur not at all *ILL*, looks much like a WILD *SEIZURE-to-WE* u *SPEAK-and-u-BREATH*…its not any medicinal STYLE *TREATMENT-for-ME* at its *LEAST-I-can-SEE*…Influenza, Bubonic Plague, Cholera, Ebola and AIDS is nothing but a MILD *FEVER-to-ME*!!
a lot of decoration and soft punches...I had a tendency to ramble/cypher like expressions instead of battlin.
NEWEST:
Yo listen, the MESSAGE-is-GRAND for a more BLESSID-DEMAND…erectin WEAPONS-in-HAND the index FLEXED-to-COMMAND, “PRESSIN-the-PRESSURE through SECTIONS-of-LEVERS” to CONNECT-with-the-PAN then cause every skin cell in your body to STRETCH-and-EXPAND NEXT-to-the-GLANDS, dehydratin you instantly (BOOM)…turn your FLESH-into-SAND without even CORRECTIN-my-GLANCE! You think you have “HARDY BARS” and your VERSES-ELITE…a “DRUNKEN FLOW/floor”, with more decoration than MARDI-GRAS on BOURBON-STREET…IM sick I could HARDLY-COUGH and MURDER-the-BEAT(police patrol)…your whole “STYLE is VEGAN” as described: the FURTHEST-from-BEEF also your SERVICE-is-WEAK, Ill “DIVE” through your BODY and PROBABLY EMERGE-with-ur-SPEECH, the “X-FACTORS” is a different VERSION-of-“BEAST”…the other day you ask me could you “KICK SOMETHING”…I shove my hand into his back like VENTRILOQUIST and began WORKIN-his-FEET until his lungs BURST-on-my-CHEEK! ur a WEAK-RHYMER…when BEEF-STEERED in a BRIEF-BLURR ill stick you FEET-FIRST through a MEAT-GRINDER…before the blades smooth ur THIGHS-DAWG, ill remove ur EYES-BALLS and drop them in a DEEP-FRYER…ur FLOW wouldn’t BE-FIRE, if you were an electrician with HEAT-WIRES a million DEGREES-HIGHER than a CHEAP-LIGHTER! Po’s a “Magician”…ILLUSIONS-DISPERSED tha conclusive CONCLUSION-is-ELUSIVE, but PROVEN-to-WORK…MOVEMENT-is-WORSE simply by FUSIN-a-VERSE, the “GRAVITY” of the flow will KILL every HUMAN-on-EARTH!! I inadvertently DISEASE and INFECT-SOULS, CONCERNIN-ME I certainly but perfectly breech and ERECT-SCROLLS…a “RHINO” (bullet) “MARC’s” the SPOT and LEAVES-a-STRETCHED-HOLE so BIG in his head, if he “LIVES” he’ll PERMANENTLY SPEAK-with-an-ECHO
less decoration and more direct punches...structure improvements. Although I still see a few flaws within this.
I think the elevation is pretty obvious...well there you have it
Peace
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fuck ya text..lol
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fuck ya text..lol
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fuck ya text..lol
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I dont TEXT anymore...btw, NO...fuck ya audio.
SEND IT...
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fuck ya text..lol
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I dont TEXT anymore...btw, NO...fuck ya audio.
SEND IT...
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^ You mad?
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^ You mad?
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And ..lol..Why am I seeing u all over these forums asking people to send to you? o.0
If u got a problem....You send it
But not to me..I'm speaking in general
Man up shun
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And ..lol..Why am I seeing u all over these forums asking people to send to you? o.0
If u got a problem....You send it
But not to me..I'm speaking in general
Man up shun
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Of course not...I'm just looking for an excuse to boot up my mic again.
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Of course not...I'm just looking for an excuse to boot up my mic again.
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And ..lol..Why am I seeing u allover these forums asking people to send?
o.0
If u got a problem....You send it
But not me..I'm speaking in general
Man up shun
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If you see me asking someone to send (i.e Krhyme)...its because hes suppose to according to the conditions set. Why would I have a problem...because you said "FUCK YA TEXT"...and I said "FUCK YA AUDIO"?
...and I had told you to "send it" if indeed YOU had a problem.
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And ..lol..Why am I seeing u allover these forums asking people to send?
o.0
If u got a problem....You send it
But not me..I'm speaking in general
Man up shun
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If you see me asking someone to send (i.e Krhyme)...its because hes suppose to according to the conditions set. Why would I have a problem...because you said "FUCK YA TEXT"...and I said "FUCK YA AUDIO"?
...and I had told you to "send it" if indeed YOU had a problem.
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Oooooookayyyyyyy? o.0 lol
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Oooooookayyyyyyy? o.0 lol
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hey Poet... send it lol b4 i go.
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hey Poet... send it lol b4 i go.
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