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VBL (March) SIXXSHOTT vs Leroy Brown
this battle was suppose to take place on the 4th but Leroy no showed..
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See if our "family's fued" i "double dare" you to HANDLE the THREAT~im a stand like a man im a MAN of RESPECT~i might "win lose or draw"different CALLIBER TEKS~but "press your luck" and your in "jeopardy" like ALEX TREBEK (family fued, double dare, win lose or draw, press your luck, jeopardy, game show scheme)/the kid is "bad news, brown" we could RAISE the STAKES~"summer slam" in front of fans you could NAME the PLACE~you might need a "undertaker" for that GRAVE MISTAKE~cuz this battle is "in the bag" like JAKE the SNAKE (badnews brown, summer slam, undertaker, jake the snake, wrestling scheme)/im on Bakers Street ready to DUMP it OFF~strapped with a Bakers Dozen when it COMES to WAR~"disappear like a genie" and "vanish like houdini" youll need every "trick in the book" like DUMBLEDORE (genie, houdini, dumbledore, trick in the book, magic scheme)/that was cool but i could DO BETTER~so this next scheme is going out to WHOEVER~thinking they ahead of the kid ill "snapback your wig" then proceed to "cap it off" for the "START of a NEW ERA" (snapback, cap, starter, new era)/when gats flare you act scared and softer then CASHMERE~so im a "check pussy" like a PAP SMEAR~if theres "money involved" ohhh goddd im a leave"Brown bagged for the goods" like a CASHIER (money involved, brown bag, goods, cashier scheme)/so this "horror flick" a get MAD BLOODY~bet this "pinhead" wont scrap and ACT GULLY~hes a good dude wit a good fam his LIFEs LUCKY~but i aint "toying wit this good guy" like CHUCKY~he the type thatll HIDE when its BEEF~even wit a "ghost writer/ryder" he aint RIDING wit HEAT~matter fact scratch that this battle is like "The Ring" cuz after "watching this video" he'll DIE in a WEEK (pinhead/hellraiser, good guy doll/chucky, ghostryder, The Ring, horror movie scheme)/i aint "clowning around" tell this BOZO STOP~i'll give him a "free round" thats a PROMO SHOT~if he really want war ill be at his front door gripping "two metal arms" like ROBOCOP~in a "flash of light" like a PHOTO OP~the "desert eagle a fly" and make this DO-DO DROP (the do-do is a extinct bird)~so this "sucker m.c" better "Run top speed" and never "walk this way like JO JOs POPS (sucker mc, walk this way,jo jos pops, RUN DMC scheme)/im einstein with a FULL I.Q~smart enough to win this battle and PULL RIGHT THREW~cuz if "i wanna rock" watch what i "do ta' Brown" when i "pop that pussy" like 2 LIVE CREW (I Wanna Rock is a song also known as Do The Brown and later it was jacked by French Montana on a song called Pop That....and 2 Live Crew were the original artist
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VBL (March) SIXXSHOTT vs Leroy Brown
this battle was suppose to take place on the 4th but Leroy no showed..
leave a comment, some feedback, some critique..
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See if our "family's fued" i "double dare" you to HANDLE the THREAT~im a stand like a man im a MAN of RESPECT~i might "win lose or draw"different CALLIBER TEKS~but "press your luck" and your in "jeopardy" like ALEX TREBEK (family fued, double dare, win lose or draw, press your luck, jeopardy, game show scheme)/the kid is "bad news, brown" we could RAISE the STAKES~"summer slam" in front of fans you could NAME the PLACE~you might need a "undertaker" for that GRAVE MISTAKE~cuz this battle is "in the bag" like JAKE the SNAKE (badnews brown, summer slam, undertaker, jake the snake, wrestling scheme)/im on Bakers Street ready to DUMP it OFF~strapped with a Bakers Dozen when it COMES to WAR~"disappear like a genie" and "vanish like houdini" youll need every "trick in the book" like DUMBLEDORE (genie, houdini, dumbledore, trick in the book, magic scheme)/that was cool but i could DO BETTER~so this next scheme is going out to WHOEVER~thinking they ahead of the kid ill "snapback your wig" then proceed to "cap it off" for the "START of a NEW ERA" (snapback, cap, starter, new era)/when gats flare you act scared and softer then CASHMERE~so im a "check pussy" like a PAP SMEAR~if theres "money involved" ohhh goddd im a leave"Brown bagged for the goods" like a CASHIER (money involved, brown bag, goods, cashier scheme)/so this "horror flick" a get MAD BLOODY~bet this "pinhead" wont scrap and ACT GULLY~hes a good dude wit a good fam his LIFEs LUCKY~but i aint "toying wit this good guy" like CHUCKY~he the type thatll HIDE when its BEEF~even wit a "ghost writer/ryder" he aint RIDING wit HEAT~matter fact scratch that this battle is like "The Ring" cuz after "watching this video" he'll DIE in a WEEK (pinhead/hellraiser, good guy doll/chucky, ghostryder, The Ring, horror movie scheme)/i aint "clowning around" tell this BOZO STOP~i'll give him a "free round" thats a PROMO SHOT~if he really want war ill be at his front door gripping "two metal arms" like ROBOCOP~in a "flash of light" like a PHOTO OP~the "desert eagle a fly" and make this DO-DO DROP (the do-do is a extinct bird)~so this "sucker m.c" better "Run top speed" and never "walk this way like JO JOs POPS (sucker mc, walk this way,jo jos pops, RUN DMC scheme)/im einstein with a FULL I.Q~smart enough to win this battle and PULL RIGHT THREW~cuz if "i wanna rock" watch what i "do ta' Brown" when i "pop that pussy" like 2 LIVE CREW (I Wanna Rock is a song also known as Do The Brown and later it was jacked by French Montana on a song called Pop That....and 2 Live Crew were the original artist
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nice work SIXX..bumped for the homie, bitches
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nice work SIXX..bumped for the homie, bitches
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Dope Sixx.. sorry it didnt work out for you..
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Dope Sixx.. sorry it didnt work out for you..
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Fuuucckk G.. you dropped that instaKiLL.. Fire Lines yo from start to finish.
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Fuuucckk G.. you dropped that instaKiLL.. Fire Lines yo from start to finish.
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@ Pugz @ WHITZ appreciate the comments..feel free to leave me some advice where needed
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Nice verse dude, It's a pity we had so many no shows.
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Nice verse dude, It's a pity we had so many no shows.
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Daaaam! your a monster with them schemes. N that 2 live crew shit was jus sick. I gotta get exclusive so I can drop vb.
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Daaaam! your a monster with them schemes. N that 2 live crew shit was jus sick. I gotta get exclusive so I can drop vb.
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@GrenTipz ~RRR~ good looking out..if you pay $5 for the exclusive for one month you could join the Video battle league and receive a free month every time to participate
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Ok Six here is ya break down my dude all honest feed ..
Stand Out Barz of Your Verse:
See if our "family's fued" i "double dare" you to HANDLE the THREAT~im a stand like a man im a MAN of RESPECT~i might "win lose or draw"different CALLIBER TEKS~but "press your luck" and your in "jeopardy" like ALEX TREBEK
iLL concept I see where you were going w/ it I honestly think it could have been executed better had you cut out some of the fillers out .. or prehaps after this bar should have brought the "game show" names back into a tying bar but overall it was a strong opener
that was cool but i could DO BETTER~so this next scheme is going out to WHOEVER~thinking they ahead of the kid ill "snapback your wig" then proceed to "cap it off" for the "START of a NEW ERA"
This was hot .. a very used concept but you brought a new fresh approach on it .. short and to the point very solid bar and landed nicely
he the type thatll HIDE when its BEEF~even wit a "ghost writer/ryder" he aint RIDING wit HEAT~matter fact scratch that this battle is like "The Ring" cuz after "watching this video" he'll DIE in a WEEK
decent bar .. the ryder/riding is iffy w/ me tbh SIXX when you actually hear you saying it but the ring punch was good .. I actually like that movie
i aint "clowning around" tell this BOZO STOP~i'll give him a "free round" thats a PROMO SHOT~if he really want war ill be at his front door gripping "two metal arms" like ROBOCOP
By far my favorite bar in the entire verse .. I liked the entire concept great bar
~in a "flash of light" like a PHOTO OP~the "desert eagle a fly" and make this DO-DO DROP (the do-do is a extinct bird)~so this "sucker m.c" better "Run top speed" and never "walk this way like JO JOs POPS
I rock w/ this bar as well but like ya opener it had alot of hidden concepts that could be looked at as filler but over all it was solid
Now SIXX ya video quality, presence, clarity etc etc were all on point in this battle nobody can take that away from you but what I think lacked in ya barz was real punchez ie lack there of .. I didn't feel the punching power but you had a lot of jabs but no haymakers ..
This verse would have beat Brown cause he suck but you got to step it up I always fetl you should battle live but you better than this I have seen better than this but again you HOF for a reason as well as a GC bring them bombs next battle
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Ok Six here is ya break down my dude all honest feed ..
Stand Out Barz of Your Verse:
See if our "family's fued" i "double dare" you to HANDLE the THREAT~im a stand like a man im a MAN of RESPECT~i might "win lose or draw"different CALLIBER TEKS~but "press your luck" and your in "jeopardy" like ALEX TREBEK
iLL concept I see where you were going w/ it I honestly think it could have been executed better had you cut out some of the fillers out .. or prehaps after this bar should have brought the "game show" names back into a tying bar but overall it was a strong opener
that was cool but i could DO BETTER~so this next scheme is going out to WHOEVER~thinking they ahead of the kid ill "snapback your wig" then proceed to "cap it off" for the "START of a NEW ERA"
This was hot .. a very used concept but you brought a new fresh approach on it .. short and to the point very solid bar and landed nicely
he the type thatll HIDE when its BEEF~even wit a "ghost writer/ryder" he aint RIDING wit HEAT~matter fact scratch that this battle is like "The Ring" cuz after "watching this video" he'll DIE in a WEEK
decent bar .. the ryder/riding is iffy w/ me tbh SIXX when you actually hear you saying it but the ring punch was good .. I actually like that movie
i aint "clowning around" tell this BOZO STOP~i'll give him a "free round" thats a PROMO SHOT~if he really want war ill be at his front door gripping "two metal arms" like ROBOCOP
By far my favorite bar in the entire verse .. I liked the entire concept great bar
~in a "flash of light" like a PHOTO OP~the "desert eagle a fly" and make this DO-DO DROP (the do-do is a extinct bird)~so this "sucker m.c" better "Run top speed" and never "walk this way like JO JOs POPS
I rock w/ this bar as well but like ya opener it had alot of hidden concepts that could be looked at as filler but over all it was solid
Now SIXX ya video quality, presence, clarity etc etc were all on point in this battle nobody can take that away from you but what I think lacked in ya barz was real punchez ie lack there of .. I didn't feel the punching power but you had a lot of jabs but no haymakers ..
This verse would have beat Brown cause he suck but you got to step it up I always fetl you should battle live but you better than this I have seen better than this but again you HOF for a reason as well as a GC bring them bombs next battle
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@ Fiji Osa you taking the time to sit through the verse and write a details expo is a big deal these days on letsbeef, so thank you off jump..however i think you may be expecting to much from me sir..
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@ Fiji Osa you taking the time to sit through the verse and write a details expo is a big deal these days on letsbeef, so thank you off jump..however i think you may be expecting to much from me sir..
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